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I am giving you all a week off to concentrate on Culminting Project Proposals and catching up on your reading.

Juniors: Your proposals will be due May 22nd. And they need to be PERFECT! So I recommend you spend some serious time with this project.

Seniors: Your exams begin on May 21st and it will be on Pride and Prejudice. I will send out a study guide next week, but you need to make sure you finish the book before exam week.

Those of you who still owe me email assignments, I suggest you get them to me soon. As always, late work will earn you half credit (which is a lot better than none).

And finally, check out the class website redesign I’ve been working on and let me know what you think via this poll.

See you all soon!

Professor Mac

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ATTENTION ENGLISH 3 STUDENTS - Email Prompt 11

Unless I have contacted you individually, you are to assume your initial project proposal was accepted. That is the project you should be writing your introductory paragraph about.

Those of you who are changing your project (the 3 or 4 of you that have already sent me emails) may write your introduction about the new project, but you will need to make note of the fact that you have changed your project topic in your response and complete a new project approval form.

Also, this assignment is due in 26 hours and I have only received 6 responses.
What are the rest of you waiting for? Get to work!

Professor McElroy

Email Journal Prompt 11 - Read Carefully!

Email Journal Prompt 11 – Due Friday, May 1 by 2:00 p.m.

 

This week there are different prompts for students in English III and English IV classes.
Please make sure you respond to the correct prompt for your class.

 

English IV (2nd and 3rd Periods)

 

Seniors, graduation is rapidly approaching and I know you all are counting it down. This week I want you to think about what needs to be said at the commencement ceremony to wrap up your thirteen years of elementary and high school education. Traditionally, the valedictorian, salutatorian, and class president make speeches at graduation, but let’s pretend that you are making the final commencement address. What would you say? How would you put all you’ve learned and all you want your peers to know into a five minute commencement address? Write your speech (the whole thing) and send it to me for this week’s journal response.

 

English III (1st, 4th, 5th, and 7th Periods)

 

This week you need to write the introductory paragraph to your Culminating Project Proposal. Your introduction should give me a clear idea of what your project is and what the rest of your proposal will say. Check this introduction carefully for spelling and grammar errors. Refer to your project manual for additional information.

 

This paragraph MUST answer the following questions:

 

  • What exactly do you plan to do? (Remember this is the introduction to your proposal. It should be a brief description of your project. Remember, introductions should catch the reader’s attention.
  • Estimate the length of time to complete your product, service, or design.
  • By what date will this project be completed?
  • Why are you doing this project? (What motivated you to choose this particular project? List all your reasons.)
  • What skills, knowledge, experience, and personal qualities do you have that will help you complete this project? (What do you know and what can you do already that will help you complete this project?)
  • What do you expect to learn from this project? (Include both what you will learn in technical knowledge about a topic or area your project covers, and what general skills you will acquire by planning and completing a major undertaking on your own. List everything you will learn.)
  • How will you fund or find resources for your project? (Explain in detail how you will pay for the costs of your project. Include a budget if necessary. Remember, you are not required to choose a project that will be costly.)

 (For this week’s prompt, you may attach your response as a Microsoft Word document – use the .doc extension, NOT .docx – as you will want to save this paragraph for use with your full proposal.)

 

Remember your responses need to be at least 200 words. Send your responses to classjournal@gmail.com. All responses must be received by 2:00 p.m. on Friday, May 1st, REGARDLESS OF ABSENCES!

 

The subject of the email must contain the number of the prompt you are responding to and your name as follows: Prompt 11 – Jane Smith

 

As was the case last quarter, I will not accept “But I don’t have a computer at home” as an excuse for not participating in this assignment. There are computers all over school, including my classroom, and at the local public libraries that are available for your use. It is your responsibility to make time to get this done once a week. A 25% penalty will be imposed on assignments received other than by email

 

Extra Credit – If you would like to earn some extra points on each of these journal assignments, you may do so by setting up a blog in lieu of emailing each entry. (For more information on blogs, see the Wikipedia entry here: http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Blog) For this assignment, you may set up your own blog and post your responses to the journal prompts on the blog in lieu of simply sending me an email. I will simply subscribe to the blog’s feed to make sure you have posted your entries on time.

 

Refer to your original instructions (on https://ourclassjournal.wordpress.com) for all of the other assignment details.

 
Professor McElroy

Click here to download:
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Email Journal Prompt 11 - Read Carefully!

Email Journal Prompt 11 – Due Friday, May 1 by 2:00 p.m.

 

This week there are different prompts for students in English III and English IV classes.
Please make sure you respond to the correct prompt for your class.

 

English IV (2nd and 3rd Periods)

 

Seniors, graduation is rapidly approaching and I know you all are counting it down. This week I want you to think about what needs to be said at the commencement ceremony to wrap up your thirteen years of elementary and high school education. Traditionally, the valedictorian, salutatorian, and class president make speeches at graduation, but let’s pretend that you are making the final commencement address. What would you say? How would you put all you’ve learned and all you want your peers to know into a five minute commencement address? Write your speech (the whole thing) and send it to me for this week’s journal response.

 

English III (1st, 4th, 5th, and 7th Periods)

 

This week you need to write the introductory paragraph to your Culminating Project Proposal. Your introduction should give me a clear idea of what your project is and what the rest of your proposal will say. Check this introduction carefully for spelling and grammar errors. Refer to your project manual for additional information.

 

This paragraph MUST answer the following questions:

 

  • What exactly do you plan to do? (Remember this is the introduction to your proposal. It should be a brief description of your project. Remember, introductions should catch the reader’s attention.
  • Estimate the length of time to complete your product, service, or design.
  • By what date will this project be completed?
  • Why are you doing this project? (What motivated you to choose this particular project? List all your reasons.)
  • What skills, knowledge, experience, and personal qualities do you have that will help you complete this project? (What do you know and what can you do already that will help you complete this project?)
  • What do you expect to learn from this project? (Include both what you will learn in technical knowledge about a topic or area your project covers, and what general skills you will acquire by planning and completing a major undertaking on your own. List everything you will learn.)
  • How will you fund or find resources for your project? (Explain in detail how you will pay for the costs of your project. Include a budget if necessary. Remember, you are not required to choose a project that will be costly.)

 (For this week’s prompt, you may attach your response as a Microsoft Word document – use the .doc extension, NOT .docx – as you will want to save this paragraph for use with your full proposal.)

 

Remember your responses need to be at least 200 words. Send your responses to classjournal@gmail.com. All responses must be received by 2:00 p.m. on Friday, May 1st, REGARDLESS OF ABSENCES!

 

The subject of the email must contain the number of the prompt you are responding to and your name as follows: Prompt 11 – Jane Smith

 

As was the case last quarter, I will not accept “But I don’t have a computer at home” as an excuse for not participating in this assignment. There are computers all over school, including my classroom, and at the local public libraries that are available for your use. It is your responsibility to make time to get this done once a week. A 25% penalty will be imposed on assignments received other than by email

 

Extra Credit – If you would like to earn some extra points on each of these journal assignments, you may do so by setting up a blog in lieu of emailing each entry. (For more information on blogs, see the Wikipedia entry here: http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Blog) For this assignment, you may set up your own blog and post your responses to the journal prompts on the blog in lieu of simply sending me an email. I will simply subscribe to the blog’s feed to make sure you have posted your entries on time.

 

Refer to your original instructions (on https://ourclassjournal.wordpress.com) for all of the other assignment details.

 
Professor McElroy

Click here to download:
Email Journal Prompt 11.pdf (12 KB)
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Click here to download:
Culminating Project Student Guide.pdf (164 KB)
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Today I spent several hours reading and grading responses to your journal prompts. This should have been an enjoyable exercise that gave me a bit more insight into your writing and thinking abilities than our short time together in class allows. What I found, however, is that the majority of you are not taking these assignments seriously.

The responses I have received are littered with typos, spelling errors, lack of punctuation, and poor grammar. You are supposed to be treating these assignments as any other formal writing assignment, which means proofreading and attention to detail are necessities. Most of you are not even bothering to make sure your have put the correct subject line on your emails. For those who have forgotten, I deduct 3 points (15%) from your grade for an incorrect subject line. (There is a reason I include it with the instructions every time.)

Additionally, several of you have not taken my warnings about plagiarism to heart. Today I entered failing marks for 12 students who plagiarized their responses. This is distressing for several reasons, not the least of which is that once you have been caught cheating once in a nine weeks, you risk failing the entire quarter over something as simple as sharing homework (a practice you all know I DO NOT condone).

These assignments are designed to allow you to express YOUR opinions and YOUR creativity. As there is no right or wrong answer, there is ABSOLUTELY NO REASON that any of you should be using other people’s words rather than your own.

I have attached a document on plagiarism that I am requiring ALL OF YOU to read and be familiar with. EFFECTIVE IMMEDIATELY, ANY STUDENT CAUGHT PLAGIARIZING, OR OTHERWISE CHEATING, IN MY CLASS WILL NOT ONLY BE SUBJECT TO THE CLASS POLICY BELOW, BUT WILL BE WRITTEN A DISCIPLINE REFERRAL FOR OPEN DEFIANCE AND CHEATING!

The following is our class policy on cheating and plagiarism as found in your syllabus:

CHEATING AND PLAGIARISM:  Cheating and plagiarism will not be tolerated. If you are caught cheating on ANY assignment, you will receive a zero. In addition, you will be barred from earning any extra credit points for that entire semester and any extra credit points you had previously earned will be removed from your grade. Any student caught cheating a second time will automatically receive an “F” for that quarter.
 
My definition of cheating includes the following:
•    copying homework or classwork
•    looking on another student's test or quiz
•    letting another student look on a test or quiz
•    using other secretive methods of giving answers on a test or quiz
•    taking information from another source that is not properly attributed
•    working with others on an assignment that was meant to be done by individuals
•    taking papers from the Internet, other publications, or other students
•    taking any part of a test to use or to give to others
•    using someone else’s words, ideas, or work in an assignment without proper attribution

Please do not allow these gross mistakes in judgment to continue.

Sincerely,

Professor McElroy

Email Journal Prompt 5 – Due Friday, March 6, 2009 by 2:00 p.m.

Email Journal Prompt 5 – Due Friday, March 6, 2009 by 2:00 p.m.

Toni Morrison (author of The Bluest Eye, Beloved, and Song of Solomon, among others) has been quoted as saying “If there's a book you really want to read but it hasn't been written yet, then you must write it.”

What book do you really want to read that has not yet been written? What story still needs to be told? You’re the author; what are you going to write?

*** A Note About Email Responses: Several of you have fallen victim to the seeming informality of email and are not spell-checking or proofreading your responses. Be cognizant of the fact that I am grading these responses for mechanics (grammar and spelling) as well as content. Please make sure there are no typographical errors in your work before you hit “send.” ***

Remember your responses need to be at least 200 words. Send your responses to classjournal@gmail.com. Make sure your subject lines reads: Prompt 5 - First Name Last Name. All responses must be received by 2:00 p.m. on Friday, March 6th, REGARDLESS OF ABSENCES! Refer to your original instructions (on http://ourclassjournal.wordpress.com) for all of the other assignment details.

Sample Prompt 1 - Ima Goodstudent

Sample Response to Prompt #1

200 words is the exact word count of this sample response. 200 words are not shorter than this response. It is not one or two sentences, but rather fills an entire paragraph. On average, a response of 200 words typing into an email will be 8 to 13 lines long. Of course, this is only an estimate and your results may differ. You are more than welcome to write more than the minimum required 200 words. If you find yourself with a lot to say about the topic presented, you may find yourself far exceeding the 200 word floor.

Did you know that all I have to do to figure out how many words you typed is drop your email into Microsoft Word and hit ALT-T and W? The program will tell me exactly how many words are in your email. (This is also a tip you should tuck away for when you are writing papers for my or any other class; it saves you the trouble of actually counting words.)

But I digress… The point of all of this is to show you what 200 words exactly looks like in an email – and now I have done just that.